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i have errors for you.  when you wake up next to seth his image is gone. it says seth bed. it only happens if you pick him at the gym tho. i checked the others.  then 3 error pages the game keeps going if you hit ignore tho. 1st is after it says. after he starts game and then screen goes to splitscreen.  2nd is after its says. after he had a dual wild hand gun, so you could assume he had alot of armour. 3rd error page comes up on mr owens route.  after it says why are they so bad? i like your game hope you keep at it :) 

The errors about playing the game were talked about in the last update, I am fully aware of them and I fully plan to fix them, and for the Seth thing, what day was it?

it's the day when you get the choice to ask him to sleep in bed with you or kick him. so maybe the 3rd day sorry i wasnt keeping track of the days.  and it only happens if you pick him at the gym. if you pick the others at the gym his image is there. when u get the choice to kick him or ask him to sleep in bed with you.

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Okie, thank you for telling me, I'll look into it! x3

Mr.Owens is high-key creepy and ya'll need to fix that.

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Bruh fuck u mean y'all? This shit is a one man prod, and how exactly is he creepy? Like the way he looks or?? 

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I have to agree with him owen is creepy his art and comments kinda the one i dont want to interact with at all

Can you please give me an example where u thought he was being creepy? It would help me fix it.

maybe get rid of the white beard make it black or dark brown he looks like santa. not a insult just a idea the rest of him i like the belly is cool the glasses  

okay, I'll see wat I can do

Ok, I didn't know that it was a one-man project and I'm sorry about that.  Also, just saying, your grammar could be a little bit more accurate.  And how is Mr. Owens NOT creepy? First of all, he tries to hang out with a student, which is illegal, and second, He drives a student home, where he lives, and third, just giving off totally creepy vibes.

ik my grammar is shit, im still learning grammar, first its not illegal for teachers to do that, they can do that when ever they want too, and second why tf did u choose that route if u thought he was creepy???

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He is odd but you are right don't choose his route if you don't like him and we still don't know who old the mc is and teacher can do that. So saying it is illegal doesn't make sense.

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Thank you, and the MC is 18, I don't outright say it but I will/have said he is a senior and about 90% of the time seniors are 18+

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I agree his white beard was ugly, because he seemed too old, now with black beard at least he seems more young but still forty's, which is great. Just like a teacher's age. 


But I strongly desagree about him being creepy. You probably would think he's if he's not your type. Because if a person don't like older men, they probably would think he's a pervert or something because if a old men hitting younger persons they would think his intentions would be only to harass them. But all his actions towards the mc is too innocent (inviting for a lunch? Saying "good day"? "How's your day"? "Let's hang out again?" Oh god what a creepy) and we don't know him yet. His background, his life, if he's alone, got divorced or lost his son... Also this game is about depression. Would we think the only one in depression is just the mc? Would Owen's is not looking for him because he remembers someone to him? Well I can't say as much because I'm not writing this game and also the game just started. Most of the characters doesn't even have a background  or said something about their lifes, except Seth. It's too soon to assumpt things.

I just hope this game continues to update and doesn't turns into an abandoned project like almost all furry games. I really want to know how this game finishes; specially Owen's rote. I really like him ♡

Yeah I agree with you, although back in the day I had a error that forced you to start on Owen's route. I understand that some people might not be into his route, it is only for people with certain taste. And I guess most people don't really have friend relationships with their teacher so when they see those kinds of relationships they think its creepy. (Also them figuring out that its a visual novel and putting 1 and 1 together. But in all reality you can't blame him for not liking a route that he was forced to be put on. (And btw I like how you analized Owen's actions, your on to something x3)

And on a side note all the characters was built around certain problems, involving depression and such so yeah MC

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I don't know what are you talking about #'-'# 

Hehehe Actually I had screenwriting classes so yeah analyzing character's behaviors was one of the subjects in the course #^^'#

I also had great relationship with my teachers, specially my vocational program's teachers because they helped a lot to study through the course. If you're good to them, they will treat you with respect, will act more patiently towards you, even explain your doubts more attentively than others. They're people after all.

Owen's kinda remember me of them, maybe that's one of the motives I like him ♡

Also just to add to end the doubt: there's no law that prohibits a teacher to date students, they being over 18 and consented, however what weights more about this kind of relationship is the "favoritism" type, that a student or teacher can use this relationship in order to gain a higher grade or to bargain to gain more praise towards the student if the student is directly under the teacher's wing. That would break the institute's grading system and harm other students merits and also spoil the institute's image. Because of that, that kind of relationship is not well seen. Also it's more like an institute policy than a state one.

Although Owen's KINDA did that kind of thing with mc but he didn't do it on purpose to gain something from him. He noticed that mc's grades dropped and asked what happened, concerned about him, and at the end he just raised a little as a token of trust, like mostly of the teachers do to their student that obviously are having a bad time.

Like I said, Owen's is such a caring old bear ♡

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Mhmmm, Im aiming to make him as a old dad type of bear but not be so much so that he is just a rip off of Coach Grifter from EA by Dyne because they would essentially be the same and i'm trying not to do that. And about the error thing, around 3.0 or something I had a point system error where it made almost everyone go into Owen's route for some reason. If "I don't know what are you talking about #'-'#" Is referring to idk. And I often see good teachers not "giving" free points for kids grades but making little easy assignments to help boost they're grade (on a side note about the grade stuff)

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Ops. My bad. I got confused about "onto something". I understood "being on to something", like being suspicious about my analyses on Owen's behavior, like I'm getting closer or something '-'

English is my second language so I misunderstood some slangs sometimes ^^'

Also I liked Coach Grifter rote as well. My favorite ones are him and Dozer. And I agree about on making something different.

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woah that menu music is intense, i legit let it play for few minutes before starting the game \m/
what are the "special codes" asked when starting a new game?
imo i don't think you need a new artist, I dig this art style shown here as its very unique.
there's an issue, even if I choose no to eating with the daddy bear math teacher for Day 2, no matter what when heading home after school to make sigils the main character always goes back to eat with them like if i had agreed to eating with him prior O.o
so besides that problem,  love the game so far :D

edit: i found a past comment of what special codes are, no need to explain. also that's fuckin awesome im all for it haha
for those that don't know, it'll be cheat codes and the dev gave an example of 10 affection points to all characters starting out :3

thankies, on the error, do you mean that even if you never agreed to eat with Owen, you end up doing it anyways? (Btw thank you for telling me instead of just letting it slide) 

yep exactly that, i coulda worded that easier welp...

heh, it's alright at least u told me

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What do u mean handy? And plz dont make it big like that

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oh, what is it doing?

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oh, ok

I've been trying to download this game but it always stops near the end.... Is this a problem for me only?

What version? (Pc, mac, or mobile)

Im trying to download the pc version. Though I did finally download it but not in my computer but rather from my phone en transfer it to my pc. 

your Discord Server link isn't working ?

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https://discord.gg/n2G8PUm

Thanks

I'm curious, are you open to having a proofreader? I'm barely into the story (first Calculus class) and have noticed quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes. I'm happy to help if you need it.

Sure! That would help alot as i'm still learning spelling and grammer. Is developer mode still active?

Err... Developer mode? Are you talking about Ren'py?

Yeah,  do Ctrl + D

I figured it out, I think. Though I'll try Ctrl+D to see what that does; I've only used Shift+O. However, I'm editing the script now. 

Ok well i have found out that renpy's auto setting for the developer mode dosent work and you have to manually do it so i will have to make a 4.1 to fix the open developer mode. But what i was going to do is just send you a copy of the game with the devolper mode enabled so that you can pin point the exact line that i fucked up in. You will get a "cheat" version if you will of the game and in exchange you will help me correct spelling and grammer (I'll also add your name to the credits) is this fine?

oof I don't know if I just missed this or something but is this visual novel nsfw?

it's a visual novel and it's going to contain nsfw content a eventually

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lol fr I'm trying to cop those codes too XD

I don't have that much codes but u can use the code "cheats" For 10 affection points (I don't know if it will crash it but it shouldn't) 

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oml i love the second part so much! maybe ill try the artist thingy b uwu

:0 did u make the second part of the game (sorry i saw you updated it) ALSO EVERYONE THAT IS READING THIS PLAY THE GAME!! ITS AMAZING!! aaaaaa!

yea i accidentally skipped update 2 and went to 3.5. (It should be 1.5 right now) But i was gonna fix it but i would have had to rename everything and that was to much effort. Next update will be 2.0

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Love the game, keep up the good work!

If you need any help with fixing the grammatical errors, I'd be happy to help!

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I usually upload it into whattpad and fix it there but last update i was running late so i rushed it out, thanks for the offer though

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Thank you for feed back! It really helps :3

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looking forward to the next update:)

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