Hey bud, just gonna say I actually enjoyed Tooth and I like that you weren't afraid to crash out and say what you were thinking. If you ever do more with a musky old man bear know I will 100% support
Looking back, I kinda was really harsh with my Lagrange. I still agree with most of the points I was making though, so I’m not apologizing. I was pissed because I didn’t expect that bad of a back lash. But whatever. This project is pretty much fucked either way, even if I wanted to come back it’d be tainted. I am in the works of making ai vns. Which will more kink focused, (incest, fat bears, musk, hard dom, generally semi taboo stuff) and not actual big stories like this one. Lmk if you’d be into them. Would just be like John’s route but not shitty
I just wanted to let you know that the VN was going good. Even though it may have its mishaps with particular plots and points, its not bad at all. Everyone is gonna have there bits and pieces that they say about your work or with any visual novel. It's their opinion and that's just that. People are gonna hate regardless what you give them or not. That's one thing that I'm learning as well is that not everyone is going to like my content and might potentially get bashed if it's too boring even if I'm trying to explain some lore or reason or if there isn't enough romance for one of my characters that particular people love. Its all about criticism, its just about how you handle it and turn it into your favor and make it potentially better. Turn the negative into positive; LAUGH!!!
I see ALOT of potential in this visual novel and it sadden me to see it be just thrown in the trash because of others. It sucks that a community can say so much shade without giving it time to evolve. Every great game starts from somewhere, not out of thin air; well maybe creatively out of our minds but still lol. I see the loving fans and see the plots and cliffhangers that this VN can make out. Its just about going though with it and having some major encouragement and/or backup. Shooot, I'd help in anyway I can if you like with ideas or editing or anything really with the VN. just msg me.
Always remember that you do have a lot of positive fans as well that enjoy your work and wish for it to prosper. Screw the haters because they're gonna do their thing. Focus on your story and how you tell it. We'll keep rooting for you!!!
thank you I appreciate it man. It’s been out for a while it’s had 3 years to become something I can say I’m proud of and I just can’t see it. The idea of it was to use a heavily romantic novel to show people how scary romance could be (by killing off all the routes in heartbreaking ways). That’s kinda the only reason for making it. I can say there are deffinetly parts I like (mostly Owen’s route because I love dilfs) but as far as the message goes I simply dont think I should be pushing my morals onto people. And if I’m being honest this was kinda just supposed to be a quick little vn I started when I was 14 and it just got way way to outa hand.
I do plan on making short sex focused novels soon once I get my own room. If your interested in ai stuff
It's great that the Visual Novel will receive a significant overhaul when the game is published, and to be honest, I'm not a fan of magic in visual novel games (in my view, hehe). I enjoyed John's presence in the game and then when he's with the MC, they're lovely when they bond, perhaps some hot experiences will bring them into no return.
its really a good thing, not just your game is fantastic, your game is the first and last game my BFF show it to me, and play it together before he travels without return :(
It's fine man, maybe ill go and stay with him and his family, they live in a beautiful country and start college there again, but thank you for ur caring it means a lot to me ❤❤❤ (idk why the heart is black lmao)
Sorry man. Idk what to say about that. That part has been the same for years. Try redownloading it but if that doesn't work then there's nothing to be done. My apologies, the phone versions are generally buggy by default
Hello loving the game, great work, think i might have found a couple of errors, where its like you skip scenes and miss a lot of the story.. In John route after graduation it looks like story is missing as you end up up getting picked up by john for a date but there was no story about it happening. And also going to a party, you wake up and say you went the next day. And on andrew route it skips and you wake up on day 8 talking that you went round to his house to game. But it never happened. Not sure if i am missing something. This is on the MAC download.
I also noticed this, there wasn't really anything involving reconciliation with John and things just kind of pick up as if certain events didn't play out or occurred behind the scenes. Unless it is all part of that bonus stuff...in which case, how do I get those codes? It kinda seemed like the graduation event was all done under a Seth route even though I was doing John's.
Can you tell me what happened in the story line you played then? And can you check if any days got skipped? It's hard to fix something that I don't know is broken. I need to know what's missing to be able to fix it
So in johns route when seth invites you to the party you dont go and go straight to bed. But then wake up with a hangover and it says you did go. And When you graduate you go back to the flat with Seth and talk about going away camping and leaving. You go to bed and when you wake up the story changes as John is picking you up for a date. But there was no scene of you and John patching things up and agreeing on going on a date.
Ahh. I see. Thank you so much. I forgot to separate the mornings of the different routes, easy fix. And it appears somehow, you guys are getting enough points to trigger Seth's route. I don't know how that's physically possible, since I removed the possiblity of that, but yeah. I'll try to fix it and possibly put out a fixed version today if possible. Tysm, I literally would've never found that out lol ty
I just found an error in the vn that takes place on day 9. My character had the wet dream of John, but when he wakes up he talks about it saying it was one of Seth and then continues down the thought trail of liking Seth.
There seems to be an issue with the android version. I did the download and installation process correctly as usual but once I opened the game from my home screen, it boots up and immediately closes and this error message pops up.
The 11th overlapped with Seth and the 12th went back to John(I restarted everything and it seems fine now if you get any questions just let me know I’ll try my best to answer them)
hello i wanted to say that your vn is very interesting but i personally think that there is not enough save slot and it would be nicer to have transitions between each scene change
Thank you, glad you like it. Might add some more save slots. Didn't think about not re-writing save files since I usually use one slot per route lol. What do you mean by scene transitions tho?
Well, for example, when our character leaves the house or goes to another room, instead of having a fade to black (or other transition effect) we have a direct image of the following scene, as if we were watching a slideshow
Yeah. That's cauz the transitions would be too slow. They'd get annoying after a while. A transition would take an extra second oppose to the millisecond it takes to click to the next image. Which doesn't sound like much, but theirs about 100 scene changes in a day
Also update on that save thing, added more slots. Or well pages. 8 pages of 8 slots so now 64 save slots.
I understand what you mean but personally I find it odd not to have a transition between each scene. But hey, I respect your choice and it's already cool that you're going to add save slots.
Is it just me or is there an entire scene missing between the player and Andrew? On day 8 it is referenced that you went to his house and played games? But that never happened? Also he tells you he is gay? Also something that doesn't happen?
Yeah. On Saterday, after the tennis match, you go to a pizza place. Named God's Pizza or something. There you meet Andrew's gay friend, Ryan, who outs him and embarrasses him infront of player. He confirms his sexuality by asking you if you're comfortable with him being gay. Then you go home and play MineCraft (MyShaft). So, it wouldn't be that a scene was missing. That'd mean an entire day was missing. What was Saturday like for you then?
Question: does Jake's route involve a lot of drug use, or is it a bit different? I'm curious into going through his route, but I want to know a bit first.
spoiler : depends on what you mean. He grows/sells weed 247 but doesnt really "use" it. Y'know, the whole "never smoke your own supply" whole thing. He cares about money more then getting high.
I'm sure there will be a scene or two of Jake and pn smoking though
I hope things get better for you, Blu3. I am really enjoying this VN and the different routes. I am also looking forward to graduation and the MC's possible magical potential.
You are talented. I don't know how to code, and admire those who can - I've even pondered about writing a script and creating sprites and CG art, then commissioning someone on itch.io to help me assemble it.
it is a bit. I'm getting there. And thanks. If people like it then it means that it's all worth it in the end.
I don't know either. That's why I use renpy, it's basically just English. Assembling it is the easiest part. And you should if you're really thinking about it. In the beginning it may be hard but as you go on it becomes more and more easier. So long as you plan everything out from the beggining, you'll be good
Christ don't quit! Your vn is good in its own way. Those f ers who posted hate comments don't have a life and don't know anything. You're doing a great job. Just ignore them and like bullies they'll get tired
Awee thanks. I wouldn't ever quit. That'd be throwing away all the effort and time I spent on it. I know it'll be worth it when I can finally teach people with it. And yeah why it'd be easy to dismiss them like that, the problem is that they're not 100 percent wrong. I'm not going to let them get to me anymore. But yeah. Thank you, and I hope you're doing okay.
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Hey bud, just gonna say I actually enjoyed Tooth and I like that you weren't afraid to crash out and say what you were thinking. If you ever do more with a musky old man bear know I will 100% support
what about some musky old fat boars with a love triangle with your dad and grandpa? 👉👈 (first project on my to do list)
uh, yes! that sounds great too! waiting patiently then
just a quick q
why do you write like ur in a vn?
because I'm the MC
that doesn’t make sense
LOL, i confused both of us
sorry i think I wrote it when I had a high fever last night
ermmm wtf
Ermmm… what the sigma
incest enjoyer
incest is one of my vanillas lol
😕
what
Never played this game but, I just see the creator calling everyone basically gooners or coomers, lol. Based.
thanks pookie boo 💅
Looking back, I kinda was really harsh with my Lagrange. I still agree with most of the points I was making though, so I’m not apologizing. I was pissed because I didn’t expect that bad of a back lash. But whatever. This project is pretty much fucked either way, even if I wanted to come back it’d be tainted. I am in the works of making ai vns. Which will more kink focused, (incest, fat bears, musk, hard dom, generally semi taboo stuff) and not actual big stories like this one. Lmk if you’d be into them. Would just be like John’s route but not shitty
Hey Blu3Be4ry,
I just wanted to let you know that the VN was going good. Even though it may have its mishaps with particular plots and points, its not bad at all. Everyone is gonna have there bits and pieces that they say about your work or with any visual novel. It's their opinion and that's just that. People are gonna hate regardless what you give them or not. That's one thing that I'm learning as well is that not everyone is going to like my content and might potentially get bashed if it's too boring even if I'm trying to explain some lore or reason or if there isn't enough romance for one of my characters that particular people love. Its all about criticism, its just about how you handle it and turn it into your favor and make it potentially better. Turn the negative into positive; LAUGH!!!
I see ALOT of potential in this visual novel and it sadden me to see it be just thrown in the trash because of others. It sucks that a community can say so much shade without giving it time to evolve. Every great game starts from somewhere,
not out of thin air; well maybe creatively out of our minds but still lol. I see the loving fans and see the plots and cliffhangers that this VN can make out. Its just about going though with it and having some major encouragement and/or backup. Shooot, I'd help in anyway I can if you like with ideas or editing or anything really with the VN. just msg me.Always remember that you do have a lot of positive fans as well that enjoy your work and wish for it to prosper. Screw the haters because they're gonna do their thing. Focus on your story and how you tell it. We'll keep rooting for you!!!
MUCH HUGS,
Blackwolf007
thank you I appreciate it man. It’s been out for a while it’s had 3 years to become something I can say I’m proud of and I just can’t see it. The idea of it was to use a heavily romantic novel to show people how scary romance could be (by killing off all the routes in heartbreaking ways). That’s kinda the only reason for making it. I can say there are deffinetly parts I like (mostly Owen’s route because I love dilfs) but as far as the message goes I simply dont think I should be pushing my morals onto people. And if I’m being honest this was kinda just supposed to be a quick little vn I started when I was 14 and it just got way way to outa hand.
I do plan on making short sex focused novels soon once I get my own room. If your interested in ai stuff
when ubdate
😴💤
Hi Blu3Be4ry, hope you are doing well, any spoiler you can give us about whats done so far? really looking for it, the best of lucks
Hi. Doing well hope you are too. Spoiler: Havent done anything since I closed the project lol. Best of lucks to you too :heart:
It's great that the Visual Novel will receive a significant overhaul when the game is published, and to be honest, I'm not a fan of magic in visual novel games (in my view, hehe). I enjoyed John's presence in the game and then when he's with the MC, they're lovely when they bond, perhaps some hot experiences will bring them into no return.
yeah I'm not a fan either. Hehe gr true da bear. More to come from him for sure
good thing i have the game
:0
its really a good thing, not just your game is fantastic, your game is the first and last game my BFF show it to me, and play it together before he travels without return :(
ah I see, sorry to here that man. I hope one day he come back
It's fine man, maybe ill go and stay with him and his family, they live in a beautiful country and start college there again, but thank you for ur caring it means a lot to me
❤❤❤ (idk why the heart is black lmao)Heh that sounds nice. And idk but they look nice ❤❤❤
Soo How i can play it?? theres no download menu isnt it?? or is it available on patreon??
read last post, mb im gonna see if theres a way to put it in title or somethng
which one is darion again
lion
Não consigo baixar o jogo
Leia a última postagem.
Hi Blu3Be4ry, when is the new update coming out, loving your job so far, keep the hard work, the best of lucks mate ;)
thanks im glad you like it, no clue though. wish you luck
Any one know the special code??
el no sabe
what
"love" :)
really?
lol got em
"Love" :)
in the code scene after name entery
No, its on Seth's route. Like I said it shouldn't be possible that you had that
can you sc where or at least say where specifically
is this the newest update with the patch I posted a few days ago?
I mean this one https://blu3be4ry.itch.io/tooth/devlog/390593/quick-patch
And did you mess around with codes?
I'm using Android and Idk why but when I start playing it just crashes on me (I was able to before but now it won't)
I play it at Android and it's working fine.
Try unistalling and installing again. If the problem persists, then it's probably your phone model.
(if this is personal just ignore me lol) what type of model do you need for this vn?
model?
does anything pop up or does it simply crash?
Simply crash. When I was giving a choice to choose vanilla or kink it would crash.
Sorry man. Idk what to say about that. That part has been the same for years. Try redownloading it but if that doesn't work then there's nothing to be done. My apologies, the phone versions are generally buggy by default
It's alright not everything is perfect. I still say your vn rocks, both character, plot and everything ☺️👍
Aw thanks man, I appricate that
bearbearbearbearbearbearbear
big bear!! he go grrr :flushed:
Hello loving the game, great work, think i might have found a couple of errors, where its like you skip scenes and miss a lot of the story.. In John route after graduation it looks like story is missing as you end up up getting picked up by john for a date but there was no story about it happening. And also going to a party, you wake up and say you went the next day. And on andrew route it skips and you wake up on day 8 talking that you went round to his house to game. But it never happened. Not sure if i am missing something. This is on the MAC download.
Im glad you like it so far. Means a lot. Can you explain or elaborate on what you mean by those? Don't exactly understand them
I also noticed this, there wasn't really anything involving reconciliation with John and things just kind of pick up as if certain events didn't play out or occurred behind the scenes. Unless it is all part of that bonus stuff...in which case, how do I get those codes? It kinda seemed like the graduation event was all done under a Seth route even though I was doing John's.
Can you tell me what happened in the story line you played then? And can you check if any days got skipped? It's hard to fix something that I don't know is broken. I need to know what's missing to be able to fix it
So in johns route when seth invites you to the party you dont go and go straight to bed. But then wake up with a hangover and it says you did go. And When you graduate you go back to the flat with Seth and talk about going away camping and leaving. You go to bed and when you wake up the story changes as John is picking you up for a date. But there was no scene of you and John patching things up and agreeing on going on a date.
Ahh. I see. Thank you so much. I forgot to separate the mornings of the different routes, easy fix. And it appears somehow, you guys are getting enough points to trigger Seth's route. I don't know how that's physically possible, since I removed the possiblity of that, but yeah. I'll try to fix it and possibly put out a fixed version today if possible. Tysm, I literally would've never found that out lol ty
All good, still a great game and just means i get to go through it again when the fixes go through.
Is this game dead cause it amazing
thanks and no just dont want to make it atm
Hi, when is the next update ? Greetings
soon, greetings
I just found an error in the vn that takes place on day 9. My character had the wet dream of John, but when he wakes up he talks about it saying it was one of Seth and then continues down the thought trail of liking Seth.
did you mess around with the special code entry by chance?
Not even sure how to. It didnt ask me to type anything yet other than the name.
I see. Then the problem seems to be that you got 5 points for Seth some how.
Opening it on Android prompts a "Tooth keeps stopping" error.
Did you retry downloading?
Several times. Same problem, unfortunately.
then idk
update and now it won't let me open the game and that I already deleted all the data so there would be no conflict help :'3
redownload it again idk too little info
There seems to be an issue with the android version. I did the download and installation process correctly as usual but once I opened the game from my home screen, it boots up and immediately closes and this error message pops up.
Two of the routes overlapped and it caused me to miss some of the bear route so kind of messed up for me
can you explain more please ?
The 11th overlapped with Seth and the 12th went back to John(I restarted everything and it seems fine now if you get any questions just let me know I’ll try my best to answer them)
what options did you choose on the first day?
sure and the seth
assuming you didn't pick yes for the teacher?
Damn, there hasn't been an update lately. That's not cash money
haha yeah coming soon
Rad.
poug chammpers
Secret codes?
"bonus" and "Love"
Dont remember if I updated bonus yet but love will come next update :)
O jogo na versão Android não está funcionando
De que forma
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1EI58CIZPpU_6KJLjyq5SQWe_4hRKLqPG/view?usp=drivesdk
que?
eu baixei e instalei o jogo mais quando eu apertei ele o jogo não abriu e isso aparece
Não sei por quê?
Seth rulez :)
Glad you like him :)
Gostei muito do jogo arte bem feita espero que continue^^
Fico feliz que você goste e espero que eu possa continuar a fazer valer a pena selvagem
hello i wanted to say that your vn is very interesting but i personally think that there is not enough save slot and it would be nicer to have transitions between each scene change
Thank you, glad you like it. Might add some more save slots. Didn't think about not re-writing save files since I usually use one slot per route lol. What do you mean by scene transitions tho?
Well, for example, when our character leaves the house or goes to another room, instead of having a fade to black (or other transition effect) we have a direct image of the following scene, as if we were watching a slideshow
Yeah. That's cauz the transitions would be too slow. They'd get annoying after a while. A transition would take an extra second oppose to the millisecond it takes to click to the next image. Which doesn't sound like much, but theirs about 100 scene changes in a day
Also update on that save thing, added more slots. Or well pages. 8 pages of 8 slots so now 64 save slots.
I understand what you mean but personally I find it odd not to have a transition between each scene. But hey, I respect your choice and it's already cool that you're going to add save slots.
Is it just me or is there an entire scene missing between the player and Andrew? On day 8 it is referenced that you went to his house and played games? But that never happened? Also he tells you he is gay? Also something that doesn't happen?
Yeah. On Saterday, after the tennis match, you go to a pizza place. Named God's Pizza or something. There you meet Andrew's gay friend, Ryan, who outs him and embarrasses him infront of player. He confirms his sexuality by asking you if you're comfortable with him being gay. Then you go home and play MineCraft (MyShaft). So, it wouldn't be that a scene was missing. That'd mean an entire day was missing. What was Saturday like for you then?
I just did a quick play through. The scene is there. So, I don't know what happened. Also I found a bug on sunday night beware lol
geez this vn has come so far. I need more big bear
Hehehe. Mm yeah it has. I hope it'll go further. Can never get enough of big bear!!
Help.... I'm severely in love with Seth ಥ‿ಥ
Hehe aww, good. We all need a demon daddy heh
Question: does Jake's route involve a lot of drug use, or is it a bit different? I'm curious into going through his route, but I want to know a bit first.
spoiler : depends on what you mean. He grows/sells weed 247 but doesnt really "use" it. Y'know, the whole "never smoke your own supply" whole thing. He cares about money more then getting high.
I'm sure there will be a scene or two of Jake and pn smoking though
I hope things get better for you, Blu3. I am really enjoying this VN and the different routes. I am also looking forward to graduation and the MC's possible magical potential.
You are talented. I don't know how to code, and admire those who can - I've even pondered about writing a script and creating sprites and CG art, then commissioning someone on itch.io to help me assemble it.
it is a bit. I'm getting there. And thanks. If people like it then it means that it's all worth it in the end.
I don't know either. That's why I use renpy, it's basically just English. Assembling it is the easiest part. And you should if you're really thinking about it. In the beginning it may be hard but as you go on it becomes more and more easier. So long as you plan everything out from the beggining, you'll be good
Thank you! I am seriously considering it as one of my goals for 2022. How are you feeling lately?
You should. And if you ever decide to, come over to the discord and I'll give you tips n shit. But good enough, you?
You too^^
Christ don't quit! Your vn is good in its own way. Those f ers who posted hate comments don't have a life and don't know anything. You're doing a great job. Just ignore them and like bullies they'll get tired
Awee thanks. I wouldn't ever quit. That'd be throwing away all the effort and time I spent on it. I know it'll be worth it when I can finally teach people with it. And yeah why it'd be easy to dismiss them like that, the problem is that they're not 100 percent wrong. I'm not going to let them get to me anymore. But yeah. Thank you, and I hope you're doing okay.
should it work that way?
[code]
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/Day 10.rpy", line 1982, in script
if puma_points >= 5:
SyntaxError: invalid syntax (Day 10.rpy, line 1986)
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/Day 10.rpy", line 1982, in script
if puma_points >= 5:
File "renpy/ast.py", line 1852, in execute
if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
File "renpy/python.py", line 2247, in py_eval
code = py_compile(code, 'eval')
File "renpy/python.py", line 835, in py_compile
raise e
SyntaxError: invalid syntax (Day 10.rpy, line 1986)
Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.4.1439
Tooth 20.00
Sun Nov 21 23:42:20 2021
[/code]
No it shouldn't. Thank you for submiting this to me. I'll get it fixed soon
I can't say I know what's been going on since I just discovered this vn but I absolutely love it, screw those hate comments
Thank you. So long as you like it, it means it wasn't all for nothing.
theres only one page to save...? oh no
?