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Sigh.its dissapointing that after i get past Mr. Owens wanting to have a lunch time with me, the game starts having an error and preventing me from finshing the game.

Hope one day i can get some assistance in the future....

What error is there and where?

already showed it in discord tag (general)

Yeah I know. Sorry about daddy

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well unforuntely, thanks to your guy that turned me off, (i was the one btw who had that horrible encouter with your guy , and I'm the Prince dude that joined on that day) i tried messenging only you but then wouldn't let me becasuse of some prevention you have on. and  the game still won't work till this day. So i unstalled it. Maybe I will install it again but after something is done about it. Was highly dissapointed >.>.

It wouldn't let me because you left the server. I have no preventions on. Yeah I know I asked you when you joined I didn't forget. If you would like to resolve your problem then try sending me a friend request, BlueBeary#6087, and I will try and work with you further. Although the problem that you showed me has already been fixed. I don't know if you expected it to automatically update your version but yeah

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I haven't played this but I think I'll enjoy this game...and also thank you for the developers 😁




On second thought I'll first wait for the update XD

Hehehe. You are welcome although I don't know why yer thanking me. Thank you too. I hope you enjoy it

will be update soon?

yes

im going to eat dorian his name sounds like that stupid fucking spiky dumb fruit from like australia

i bet hes a fucking kneef too

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Listen buddy I will assiasianate you, little rat boy yeah yeah you're a little rat boy you fucking goblin yeah yeah

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UwU scary...hahaha

be quiet aint no one was talkin to you

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cope

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Well well well. Look who's back

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hola \o/
i logged into my itch account after a year lmao

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Yeah I see. So, why the follow?

i accidentally unfollowed and was like "wth no dont do that" so i refollowed \o/

I see. Alright

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The story is cool the artwork is cute. I waiting for more in future. I love the story of Seth. He's like born for the protagonist. The language you use it's can be understand even i'm a foreinger so i can understand that no offense. I wish in the future there is gonna be a little nsfw artwork in this game? Thx for making a good game for a gamer like me to play. 

Hehehehe oh trust me there will be some nsfw. Thank you for the complments I appricate it. I don't take offense to that all I'm glad you can understand it. Thank you for being a good gamer and playing my game and writing a awsome review! Thank you and I hope you have a good night man

were is da discord link

Just click connect

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Huge typo I found you says angles instead of angels

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Also again if I say no to Owen and or the dorian it still forces me to interact with them I said no to Owen saying if I had a minute and said no to dorian if he could have a pencil im on android btw

Thank you for the type-o , man. I'm gonna try and contact you on discord but if i cant do that then ill come back here

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Is there a way to just date 1 guy? Because I keep getting the bear (teacher) and Seth showing that they are interested (and the character flirting back) while I'm dating Dorian (the Mountain Lion|Puma) and I'm the kind of guy who goes for a guy and only that guy exists, feels like I'm stringing along the others while cheating on Dorian (and it feels like the game doesn't give me a choice on that), and I don't like that... Also a guide of the game would be nice...

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Uhh... yeah  idk how thats happening. There is only a way to date one at a time. May I ask what options you pick in the game? Thank you man I hope u have a good day. Also i do plan on having a guide later on but i want it to be hard right now in the game to simulate how hard it is in real life

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Picked as food chicken biscuit (what is that even?) I skipped the lunch "date" with the teacher though next day I was forced to go on a date lunch with him (the teacher is becoming creepier by the day by the way) , told the creepy teacher Seth was a good friend, lpicked Dorian as partner when in the gym game of ball (don't remember how it was called) let Seth share the bed with me (seemed cruel letting him sleep on the floor, seemed cold and cruel to ignore him, and downright evil to kick him) took his hand when the sleep paralysis/nightmare did happen in the shower. Those are the choices I can remember right now... 

You don't know what a Chicken Biscuit is? Ohh I'm sorry you're missing out man. I will look into this and I'll come back when I figure things out. Tysm and i hope u have a good day, for now.

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Thanks, you too! :) 

Okay, so I played through it the same way you did and it didn't force me to go out on the lunch date with him. You sure those are the stuff that you picked

No, I'm not stalking you. Your comments belong to the group of the high-class comments, so to say, so I like answering them is all. 

Please tell me, if you don't like writing so much. Also, this isn't my native language, so there can be errors, especially when I'm tired. I'm writing this so you don't get upset. People tend to just leave one be and not care about writing back, what I truly hate. Makes me feel shitty, even though I get over it eventually)

Should I sound cringy, I don't care. Good manners are more important to me for "first encounters".

The exact same problem applies to me. After a while I finally put the game aside, because the teacher is honestly freaky, creepy and lustful AND he looks like he's at least in his 40th. The others can't be older than 17 or 18, except Seth of course.

I tried, I think, 3 of the others. When I heard the Golden Retriever likes weed, I quit his route (he looks too stereotypical for being high on something, I am not okay with this...), Sam's frat friend is not even approachable and Dorian thinks he has a chance, but, as we know, ultimately doesn't.

Kinda sad you didn't like Major/Minor. Well, it is what it is. *shrug*

As a sidenote: You remind me of Samtoinette, another person I met here. She is really cool to speak with. (Our monthly exchanges clarify it)^^

I didn't said that you were stalking me, I was merely curious. Sorry if it came out wrong. 

What? Haha, no, not at all.... Sorry, if you understood *me* wrong! I need to go to bed, it's way too late. smh

I simply try to make conversation. Not more not less. :)

What the fuck is all of this

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What the fuck is your comment¿

...Sorry, if I came across wrong, and it's now causing confusion.. But tell me, what is it you don't like about my comments? My statements are reasonable and valid, just sayin'.

I do like the writing. In semantic sense. The syntactic component is kinda weak, could be improved.

Thank you for your feedback! This update that is coming out will hopfully fix most of the synatactic errors. I appricate the feed back! Have a good day man

I have been anticipating this next update for a long time. Watching this VN evolve from its first update is a real treat. So here I am, at midnight, waiting for the next update to be released ... 0_0

It's done now I just need to render it. It just hit the 15th for me, sorry

I'm uploading em now. Sorry I pulled a all nighter then passed out while it was rendering. Have a good day man

I just finished playing this and I just can say that this is so fucking good what I liked the most is that u gave us the choice to kill like we can choose our way and not going with the novel love this so much hope there will be update soon

Awe thanks man I'm glad you liked it. Although I'm confused on what you mean by not going with the novel. It's close I have about a day and a half to do then I should be done

Thanks for the reply what I mean that some novel that I played make u move in one direction so it doesn't matter what u choose but here every choice have a different direction and I hope we can make us romance more than 1 character in the same time lol ( sorry for my English it's my 3rd language andI don't speak it well lol ) and I live in anti gay country so I really can feel what mean to be bullied for being what u want to be  ♥️

Oh uh well they mostly do lead in the same direction so idk. They arn't at the moment, but they might be in the future. I'm sorry man I know that's hard and I wish you luck in that

Btw it's pretty decent for being your third language 

When next update been awhile

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it will most likely be around april 15th or so, cornavirus. have a good night or day. (Btw you're on my discord server so if you want a faster way to contact me)

When you finish this have you thought about a sequel. Or a something similar set in the same universe.

Yes I have, although I don't know if I will get to it. If I do though, it will just be in the same universe, just in a different world. (Also sorry for the late response. I was away for a bit)

even if it was on a diffrent world I would love to see it. No problem you were probably busy doing something important.

Pfft aw thanks. Well even if it dosent relate to Tooth, another VN is gonna come out. Eh kinda it's mostly i forget to check on here. I hope u have a good night or day, and clean hands.

Would love to see even if it's not related to tooth, and You as well. 

Hehe thanks. The idea of maybe making a vn that reloves more around the fucking sounds interesting. So I might do that some time

when will the next update be? I've really been enjoying what we have so far especially John

Hopefully soon. Since the Cornavirus is putting me in I'm gonna have more time to work on an update so I'm trying to do some extra stuff than just re doing the script. Like GUI and maybe newer artwork possibly

Can you romance the Lion?

Yes. You can romance him all you want.

Good to know, thank you! :) 

Hehe yeah. Have a good night/day man!

Likewise! :) 

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Man plz tell me were a wolf i kinda hate being human

Maybe, maybe not

John is hitting all those teacher/student kinks just right. had a boner whole time doing his route, wanna plow him on his desk >:3


But Seth tho, "I would kill anyone for you" so romantic +__+

such a hard choice between these two hmm

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BAHA! I mean yeah they're supposed to. Hehe although I think that would hurt a ol' bear's back after awhile. Yeah, ig it is. But real shit if he says "I would walk a mile on legos for you" then shit getin real. Have a good night man

Well, i just started playing but i already have 2 things to say. 

First, the buttons that come up when you have to make a decision need to be reworked. They're not even buttons, just text with no background, and the text is white, making it very hard to read, sometimes even impossible. This urgently needs to be changed. 

The second thing is the grammar, there's a lot of errors, though this isn't as big an issue. 


Other than that, the idea of the game is quite interesting, i like it so far.

Thank you. I'm glad that you like it. With the menu choices are you on phone or pc?

I'm on Android

And for the grammar thing, i was wondering if maybe you needed help? I could help you out and correct the few errors in text if you want

Oh. Well, for Android there isn't really a fix for the menu choices. I've already tried to fix them once and it didn't work for some reason. For the grammer issue, I will be going through it throughly and fixing it. I just havnt dont it yet but Ik it needs to get done, thanks for the offer though. I hope you have a good night man.

Ah i see, thanks. 

No, thank you

Review time!!

i may or may not have happy and sad cried more than i should have in under a few hours.

the fact that i got emotionally attached to almost every character means this game is pretty much perfect storywise 

i did bump into some glitches but that was because my computer went screwy while unzipping the files

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im totally not currently crying rn what are you talking about

amazing game 10/10 would play every route possible in one setting again

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Hehe really? Well, I'm glad you like it, but I'm sorry that you cried. It's most likely glitches in the game tbh there is alot atm. Bear hugs! have a good night! (btw ur pfp fits this)

Been a blast reading your story.  It's interesting, and look forward to read more. 

Do wish for NSFW scenes in MC dream about Seth, and so on. It seems like a good fantasy. 

A couple of problems tho. 

I can only read 3 lines, if there is 4 or more lines, it dissappear under the meny and behind / under the screen.

When choosing play style on the Ybox I got a error, also got a error a couple of others times also. 

Sometimes the lights are off, especially in the kitchen, I do see the artwork / pictures, but it's dark. 

I'm using Android 10 with screen resolution 2340 x 1080. 

I am aware of the Ybox error. God that little thing has been there for months, but I think I fixed it with the new thing that i'm gonna realise. With the line thing I guess I will have to just split some of the lines in half. I don't know why it dose that. For that NSFW scene I'll see what I can do, but I will be changing it anyways. (Rimming is too kinky for some people). With the dark thing, I forgot to make a sprite for a kitchen with a light. It will be done adventually. I hope you have a good night/day and thank you

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Awww, rimming to kinky?... Well I don't think so. It is som funn with a Demon after all, who knows what to expect what a Demon does? Well You do in this case. Guess it's hard to please everyone. Just do what you think is best. It's yours fantasy story. 

Thanks for replying, really appreciate it. 

Looking forward to updates so I can continue the story. A couple of bugs don't bother me, this is like a beta test anyway. 

Btw, it's at night atm. Love from Norway. 

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Hehe yeah. I may not change it and just leave a warming in, but most likely because the Sex scene will be more kinky. I plan on making a code after everything is done that allows there to be kinky sex scenes. I may not even do that idk. I really appreciate you taking the time to tell me some errors tbh. Well then have a good day and love from America.

A warning about sex scene is smart. Maybe opt for skip the sex scene or do the scene when it starts. I have seen this on other interactive VN's.

It's my pleasure to help, hope my input may help you. 

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Thank you, I'll prob make an option to skip. It dose help tbh thank you

Ye idk I'm just bored

I feel that

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Also I'm kinda retarded

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X to doubt

Yo random question but is pizza good like I know I've eaten it but still

I'm confuzzed. Like are you asking in genreal if it's good or like..I'm just gonna say Yes

Are there any explicit nsfw scenes ?

No there is not atm! 

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Hehe, well about two months for the original plan, but it's getting changed as I go along. So do I and I have a bunch of it. Have a good day/night

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I think the pizza scene is glitched as it has crashed my game but starting from the begining fixes it, there are still multiple errors around the time when you play the videogame with Max though. P.S. love the game so far

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I know about the game..game errors. Like the game inside the game..what ever. Idk why it keeps acouring I thought I fixed it, but I will look into it. The pizza scene shouldn't be glitched idk why it's doing that. Have a good day/night

Me clearing my schedule like

Hi, just curious as to if you know when the update it going to be released, I really like this game and the suspense is killing me.

Working on the Android Release atm. Havn't made it yet on this pc and I have to get the stuff for it again. Have a good night/day man! 

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It has been released! Sorry I had to sleep

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Haha good i'm glad u got it fixed.

BRUH I'm having trouble downloading the newer apk i have no clue what to do 

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I love this game, it’s cute, interesting, and just all-around great. Do you know when the update is going to be released? I’m not trying to sound pushy or impatient, I’m just excited for the update.

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Hehe aww thank you. I plan to update it near the 30th. Sorry for it taking so long, but for some good news it's alot of shit. I'm already at 2820, normal day is 1500 - 2000, and I plan on having  about 800+ or so more. You don't sound pushy tbh thank you for asking. I wish you have a good day/night.

Nice, I hope you have a good day/night as well 

Is there going to be a update soon? Also i am loving this game so far.

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Yeah, sorry with christmas and new years I got set back. Also Update 9 is being pushed back abit so I will still have time to do it. 15-20 it should be done.

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ok cool😁

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Is there going to be an update soon? I really love the way you write! <3

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Yes. I got delayed because of christmas but yeah. Either at the end o f the month or by jan 20th

Hey, I have been having a problem we're none of the androids versions are working, also is there any gay sex scenes?

not any gay sex scenes atm but their will be. Maybe try downloading them again? They should be working

Seth has one doesn't he? I mean it's a dream but its still NSFW gay sex

Well yes I guess in a way but he will have a actual one in the future

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Okay, I'm literally hooked to this game now.

This game... I just don't know what to say. There are some grammatical errors, but they get over shadowed by all the good stuff. 

First of all, it tackles with a problem of sexuality, which itself is kind of a sensitive topic for some people. The bullying part is kind of sad, though I can't relate much to it, I do get called 'gay' by some people, even though I never told them or did something publicly for them to know.

Second of all, the characters are well written. In just 20 minutes of playing this game, I'm already attatched to Seth and Max. I just love them so much!

Third, I love all of the humour here, though some of it is dark. I just like how the character just goes along with Seth's dark humour as if Seth was his childhood friend and he just does that all the time.

Lastly, this game is so wholesome... Like, I love it how Seth breaks almost all of the demon stereotypes, and I also love how cute Seth can get! At the end, Seth asking the character to cuddle... it just warms my heart.

All in all, I love this game. I await eagerly for its next update!

Awe! Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. Yeah they're a lot but i hope in update 9.0 they will all be gone or so. It is a very touchy subject for most people even if you haven't had any situations or anything with it. I'm glad you can't relate to it because I wouldn't wish being bullied about their sexuality on anyone. Heh thank you, they aren't really that well written yet but they will be in the future (some of them have the same characteristics and they don't stick to their personalities much). It's good that you like Seth's route the best tho tehe. Sorry about the dark humor, I can't really tell the difference of what kind of humor is accepted as normal or dark so sometimes they get mixed in. Hehe yeah, "Not all demons are bad". He was meant to not really be like a demon because it would be weird having a grumpy servant around you all the time and to point out that stereotypes of people are just general opinions. Yeah, put a man in solitude for long enough and he'll become a cuddler heh. I hope you have a good day/night 

Thanks for replying! Also, don't really worry about the dark humour. I personally love it! And, I also kind of wanna cuddle with Seth...

Also, I have a doubt. What are the species of the main character and Max? I believe Max is a canine. And the main character doesn't seem like a canine, but I wanna know what species he is. 

Anyways, again, I love your visual novel! Have a good day/night as well! 

The main character is human. He was gonna be a wolf but im gonna change it and make it more obvious  in 9.0. Max is a wolf lizard hybrid (the tail in the back is a lizard tail with fur on it). Awe hehe im glad u do and im gkad u like it so far. Ah, a fellow person of dark humor hehe.

Thanks for informing me!

Also, I wonder how you got an idea on what story the visual novel should be based on? Were you planning about this story for weeks or months before creating this game? Or did it just came out of the blue, like how it does for me when I'm writing stories?

eh, i cant really think of one off the top of my head but one with like a genie or something. Yeah ive planned the vn for a long time so i kinda even know what to do with it up to day 7. I was making ideas and adapting them till i found  a story line that would work, oh u write storys? What kind do u write?

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I'm sorry that you had to Indore that as a kid, a young kid at that. I hate people that are like that but unfortunaly there are many with that mind set. I hope that you don't have to deal with them anymore and your in a better place now. I'm glad that you could get something from the VN even if it was unpleasant at least. I know its not my place to intrude but..Never loose yourself while trying to hold onto someone who doesn't care about loosing you. Your sisters are toxic, they don't deserve you. Never change your self for someone else's approval when they don't deserve it. You are you and you are special, unique, and if someone trys to discriminate against your opinions, sexuality, or customs they just don't understand and they're not worth reasoning with. On a side note, Nobody can hurt you without your permission. Just because someone says that something is wrong that doesn't make them right. People and kids will always be dicks and say mean things but if those things effect you is only up to you.

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BlueBeary you is awesome, this game is so good

love you <3

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Awwwe hehe thank you, I'm glad you like it. I hope you have a good day man. Love yah too hehe <

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